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Sometime jealousy is good

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Letzte Änderung: 20.10.2008
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34981 Wörter, 10 Kapitel
Luffy finds a girl from the harbor and is ready to help her. She isn't staying on the ship, but changes a lot while she is there. She helps to open someone the eyes. ZoxRo,LuxNa

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~komplette Fanfic~ V: 19.09.2008
U: 20.10.2008
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Kapitel 1 I have a problem... E: 19.09.2008
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Kapitel 2 This will be a funny game. E: 21.09.2008
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Kapitel 3 One day can change a lot E: 24.09.2008
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Kapitel 4 A bad question E: 28.09.2008
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Kapitel 5 Do we need that jealously at all? Oh yes we do E: 01.10.2008
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Kapitel 6 Power can chance people E: 02.10.2008
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Kapitel 7 She is back, Sanji-kun! E: 07.10.2008
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Kapitel 8 Is here someone normal? E: 13.10.2008
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Kapitel 9 This isn’t fair… E: 18.10.2008
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Kapitel 10 I want her back! E: 20.10.2008
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  • Charakter
    Lorenor Zoro

    Age: 19
  • Charakter
    Mina

    Age: 18
    Hair color: blond
    eye's color: blue

    She is a cheery and friendly young girl.
  • Charakter
    Monkey D. Luffy

    Age: 17
  • Charakter
    Nami

    Age: 18
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Von:  Zorobin
2012-11-02T22:35:19+00:00 02.11.2012 23:35
woooow :o
i love Zoro and Robin :*
best ff .. ever !
Von:  elysian03
2008-10-21T14:28:48+00:00 21.10.2008 16:28
So that's why Mina lost interest.
I wasn't so surprised, then it makes sense.
Again - poor Sanji V.V
Now he lost all women around him ^^'

Your FF was great and I liked the end :D

xxx


Von:  elysian03
2008-10-21T12:20:24+00:00 21.10.2008 14:20
Oh poor Sanji T.T
It's so true, that he is always trys he's best to get the attention from the women.
Although I could never let him have Robin or Nami, especially Nami she just belongs to Luffy ^.^
I hope he really will find some day a girl who will fall deeply in love with him in the manga.

xxx

Von:  elysian03
2008-10-21T11:06:13+00:00 21.10.2008 13:06
Well, that's funny xDDD
Mina and Ace didn't get along, but it seems that now they changed their minds about each other :D
I think, they could fall for each other, but then I would feel really sorry for Sanji xxDD

xxx
Von:  elysian03
2008-10-21T10:01:45+00:00 21.10.2008 12:01
What a great chapter!! ^-^
I love Luffy and Nami, they're just so sweet together
^.^

xxx


Von: abgemeldet
2008-10-18T20:56:07+00:00 18.10.2008 22:56
Hi^^
also das Kappi is insgesamt toll <33 besonders die letzte Szene, nur i-wie...spinn ich, oder is deine satzstellung falsch? wenn ich das richtig sehe übersetzt du quasi wörtlich aus dem deutschen ?!
Naja, wie gesagt, nicht nur das kapi, die ganze FF is klasse, weiter so!
lg Ryoko
Von:  -ChiRo-
2008-10-08T13:45:24+00:00 08.10.2008 15:45
Oh damn robin is so mean xD" Minas little brother..
I think, my little heart can't handle this xD That's too mean xD But I'm curious *grin*
Hope you'll write more soon~
I wanna see the hot little brother ♥
Von:  elysian03
2008-10-02T21:08:58+00:00 02.10.2008 23:08

What happened with Chopper? xxDD
He was really bossy lol

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"“Do you know what I love about you? I love you hair, their colour and their softness. But the most a love your self-confidence.” Said Luffy it seriously.

“Luffy, what happened to you?” Nami turned red little. “It isn’t like you at all.”

“I fell in love.”"
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That was so romantic ^.^

xxx


Von:  elysian03
2008-10-02T17:41:49+00:00 02.10.2008 19:41
It was so sweet when Luffy and Nami kissed ^.^
Finally they got together :D
I was really surprised that Mina planed all that.
I feel sorry for Sanji.
Now both Nami and Robin are already taken xxDD
He's going to be so angry at Zorro and Luffy lol

xxx


Von:  -ChiRo-
2008-10-02T14:48:39+00:00 02.10.2008 16:48
Oh damn, I love it *_*
I just have read it today and I swear, It's wonderful! I really really like it, even if I can't understand english soooo well.
From all of it, I like the scenes with zoro and robin the most because that's my favourite pairing.
It was funny and sad in the same time.
I hope you'll write more FF's like this in the future and I would like it if you could send me an ENS then.

Chibi-Robin