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Sometime jealousy is good


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Luffy finds a girl from the harbor and is ready to help her. She isn't staying on the ship, but changes a lot while she is there. She helps to open someone the eyes. ZoxRo,LuxNa

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~komplette Fanfic~ V: 19.09.2008
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Kapitel 1 I have a problem... E: 19.09.2008
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Kapitel 2 This will be a funny game. E: 21.09.2008
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Kapitel 3 One day can change a lot E: 24.09.2008
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Kapitel 4 A bad question E: 28.09.2008
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Kapitel 5 Do we need that jealously at all? Oh yes we do E: 01.10.2008
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Kapitel 6 Power can chance people E: 02.10.2008
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Kapitel 7 She is back, Sanji-kun! E: 07.10.2008
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Kapitel 8 Is here someone normal? E: 13.10.2008
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Kapitel 9 This isn’t fair… E: 18.10.2008
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Kapitel 10 I want her back! E: 20.10.2008
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  • Charakter
    Lorenor Zoro

    Age: 19
  • Charakter
    Mina

    Age: 18
    Hair color: blond
    eye's color: blue

    She is a cheery and friendly young girl.
  • Charakter
    Monkey D. Luffy

    Age: 17
  • Charakter
    Nami

    Age: 18
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Von:  elysian03
2008-09-28T21:12:47+00:00 28.09.2008 23:12
Hmm....Luffy has grown up ^.^
I would'n like it, if Mina would join the crew.
She really would get in the way ^^'
Hopefully, Nami is going to make Luffy crazy about her. ^-^

Zorro seems really mad at Robin :(
I hope she can fix that.
Actually it is a little bit weird that Robin calls Zorro not with his name. I mean she does trusts him, so what is that all about?
Robin has to talk to him.

Write fast, please :D

xxx


Von:  elysian03
2008-09-24T19:45:11+00:00 24.09.2008 21:45
Great chapter!!
Finally Nami realized that she's in love with Luffy ^.^
I'm wondering what will happen next :D
I hope Luffy will realize that he loves Nami

xxx
Von:  elysian03
2008-09-21T10:10:52+00:00 21.09.2008 12:10
Cool!!!!
I wanna know, how this game is gonna be like xDDDD
Nami is going to be so jealous *happy*
I hope Luffy will be jealous some day, too.
For any reason, I don't care why, he just has to, too. lol

xxx
Von:  elysian03
2008-09-19T21:29:34+00:00 19.09.2008 23:29
I liked it ^-^
Nami is going to kill Luffy ^^'
I feel so sorry for him.
I guess he forgot thet bags where Mina sat, isn't that right?
Hopefully, he can get them back
I can't wait, until the next chapter is up =)

xxx