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Die for my crew

'We miss you Luffy!'
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what can i do?

When I wake up, there in only darkness around me. I lie on a cold stoneflore. It is really hard to open my eyes, because they are so heavy. There is only a little bit light, so I don´t see so much. The only thing I see, is a black room. No. Not a room. A cell. That means: I´m not dead. I´m in prison. With one is better? I can´t tell. If I would be dead, that means I failed a battle, but I would have fallen in a fight. But I´m in prison. That means I failed and I´m arrestes. Nothing could be more embaressing for me. I want to be king of pirates. There is no way for a king of pirates to go to prison. In pain I must close my eyes. What should I do now? What can I do? And the most interesting question: Do I want to do something? Why don´t I only close my eyes and die? No. That is not what I think to do. I will not die like this. There is something I must know. My crew. I must know what had happened to them. I must know if they flee and if not, what had happened to them. With this, I open my eyes ones more. It takes a little time till my eyes get used to the darkness. Now I can see a little more. But if I haven´t seen what I can see now, it would be the same. Anything I can see are the callbars. And behind them, there is only a wall. With a lot of pains I sit up and lean my back against the wall. It is cold, like anything in this cell. It´s like any light had left this place to give the power to the darkness. And in the darkness, there is no time. I can be here for only a couple of minutes, hours, days. I don´t know. But that is not important. The only important thing is, that I had enoth rest. Enoth rest to try a prison break. Yes. I don´t want to try. I will. Suddenly the in the cell turns on. It´s so bright that I have to protect my eyes with my hand. Then there are footsteps, but I can´t see who is there. I must strain myself hardly, to see something. And then, I can see, who had come. It is someone I don´t really want to see now. Navy officer Smoker. After all he finally caught me. After so many escapes and fights. Like last time, I must smile. Smoker stand before the cellbars, on the other side and smile with a sigaret in his mouth. I never saw him without one. I break the silence at first: ‘Where is my crew?’ Smokers smile goes bigger, what makes me really angry. If there wouldn´t be the bars, he wouldn´t stand there anymore. If he done something to my friends, I will kick his ass, that he isn´t able to sit for a very long time. I ask one more time: ‘Where is my crew?’ ‘Not here,’ he answer, ‘But they will come to rescue you. And if this will happen, we get them.’ I tear open my eyes. They have me and want to get my crew. And I´m the bait. I will not allow this. I will flee, before they can arrest them. Smoker look at me in surprise, as I begin to laugh: ‘Do you really think they will come? No. They will not come. I ordered them to go away. And if I order something, they will do it. Belife me smoker. You will not get them.’ I know that I´m wrong, but why tell him? Smoker loud voice sounds thrue me: ‘and if they will not come, I have a consolation prize. I´m the one, who cought the two brothers anybody want to arrest.’ I´m totally shocked. The two brothers? Two? I scream at Smoker: ‘you mean Trace? Where is he? What have you done to him?’ Smoker laugh like crazy. He really makes me angry, but I can´t fight him. If would be bad, if he knows that I´m not so weak anymore. I must keep him thinking that I can´t move. ‘Hear me, strawhead Luffy. I´m in a really good mood today, so I will bring you two together.’ Smoker klapp with his hands and once more, there are footsteps. The door of my sell open and a lifeless looking body is throw in. ‘Trace!’



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Von:  Yinchan
2008-08-23T12:33:04+00:00 23.08.2008 14:33
AHHHHHHHHH
*ace anguck*
*heul*
*luffy und ace knuff*
du kannst dich sog ut ausdrücken >.<
das hört sich sooo toll an >.<
Von: abgemeldet
2008-08-23T11:03:38+00:00 23.08.2008 13:03
ui wieda son tolles kapi *g*
bis jetz versteh ichs noch xD
sag mir bescheid wenns weitergeht^^

lg
Von:  sunrise92
2008-08-22T16:29:05+00:00 22.08.2008 18:29
hallooo ^^
ich hab grad deine FF entdeckt und hab sie eifnach mal angefangen zu lesen, obwohl ich bis jetzt noch keine englische FF gelesen hab!!

das is echt genial O___O
ich musste beinahe heulen beim ersten und zweiten kap *schniief*
das is echt traurig gewesen!!

aber ich bin sooooooooo froh, dass ruffy noch lebt!! *strahl*
aber das er von smoker gefangen genommen wurde und auch noch ace, das is echt beschissen *grml*
die armen -.-
und ich hoffe, dass ace noch lebt *dichfragendanseh*

war jedenfalls echt genial, hätte nich gedacht, dass ich das englisch so gut verstehen würde xDD
*knuddel*
weiter so, weiter so, weiter so xDD
*knuff*
Von:  Rabia
2008-08-21T05:51:28+00:00 21.08.2008 07:51
Meine Güte bist du aber schnell mit online stellen *aus der puste ist*

wieder ein sehr schönes kapitel (das ich wieder verstanden hab xD... vielleicht kann ich ja doch ein bisschen englisch!)

auf jeden fall muss ich dich loben... Ich könnte nie und nimmer eine geschichte in englisch schreiben. ich bekäme nicht mal zwei sätze zusammen xD...

okay ich freu mich aufs nächste kapitel

glg
kisu-chan


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