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China Doll

Inspiration came, hit and forced me to write.

Now, I wrote a drabbel, and I think some more will follow. The reason why they are only drabbels? I love drabbels. They are short, but they are so... intriguing. I simply adore them. Why they are written in english? It's easier for me. It may sound weird, but it is.

So, here's the first one, the second one, called Step by Step will follow shortly.

Enjoy the story. ^__^

Oh, and if you want to leave a comment... you can also write it in german, if it's easier for you!^^
 

China Doll
 

Fye is like a China Doll, beautiful.

But every beautiful face has its cracks, like it's going to fall apart soon.

Kurogane remembers a time, when his Princess broke one of her precious dolls.

It had been a very very beautiful doll, a wide smile painted on its face.

But when the doll broke apart, the smile was separated from the face.

And the ninja still remembered how sad the doll looked, without its smile.

Tomoyo-hime had cried over the broken doll and the tears had landed on its face.
 

Kuroganes still remembers how the tears slipped down the dolls face.

When Kurogane looks at Fye, he can see the tears streaming down the wizards face, even though he is smiling.

Maybe, Kurogane muses, someday Fye will shatter like that doll. If the mage finally stops smiling when that happens?



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Von: abgemeldet
2007-04-01T23:06:41+00:00 02.04.2007 01:06
A great idea to compare Fai with an china doll! ^.^
It fits, especially Kurowanko making this comparison.
What I liked most was that the tears on the dolls face were from another person and not from the doll itself.
Maybe implicating that Kurogaksei might be the one crying if something should happen to Fai? (well, alright he didn't cried on certain events in recent chapters but still)
Anyway thanks for sharing this inspiration :D
Von: abgemeldet
2006-12-02T18:45:23+00:00 02.12.2006 19:45
hey! because I think you're quiet funny, I will give you the great pleasure and write the first comment and in english! But my English is not soooooo good! please be gentle and and read it! But I know it has been a time since you've written this text so I'm not sure whether you will read this! But if you read this, I will ask you a favour: Would you please read my story about fye and kurogane? I know it was advertisement but I would like to know what you think about my story it's true I think you're a really good writter and i love fye so much and kuro is the only one who will undertand kurogane that's the only possilbility^^! And please forgive me that my story is written in german^^
bye darky


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